I remember going for a walk in a park and watching little kids play together. Then I thought about my childhood and how much things have changed now.I thought about the park, there used to be swings in that park too, but now there are only slides. Then I thought about the things I used to do then. Then I thought about how much innocent we all were as kids. Then I saw a person playing badminton over there then I thought to myself that I hadn't played badminton for a long time, and I would play this weekend. Then I thought about how much I used to play badminton when I was a child. I remember I used to play every weekend. I remember how fun it used to be. I remember I would go after breakfast and play for like 2-3 hours.Then I thought about how much HW I have now and how much more busy I am than in the past. But it's ok, I told myself. Then I went back home and watched some TV. Then I thought about the TV program I just watched. I thought about what happened on the TV show. Then I started thinking about the movie stars. Then i started thinking about movie awards. I remembered it was fun to watch.And I enjoyed it a lot. Then I thought about the people that won.I thought some of them deserved to win, but some of them didn't really deserve to win but they won anyways.
This is actually pretty good stream of consciousness, that is if you took out all the Then-I-thoughts. It feels very bumpy because of those, like I'm driving on a rough road. You should be giving us a taste of what happens in your mind as it happens rather than a simple list of thought. You really started getting to real stream of consciousness when you interacted with the world and reflected on the world, specifically the badminton. Of course you don't need to start all your sentences with the same phrases. Not bad.
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